0064 Please check the following sentences and correct them for any mistakes. 080223

Tony and James are saying, “Our entire family enjoys outdoor activities, for example, in addition to ice fishing, hunting, fishing, canoeing trips, etc. ” Tony adds, “We have a cabin in northern Minnesota, and our family usually spends a lot of time at our cabin during the summer, accordingly.” Tony kindly shows us the ropes and some of his family secrets on ice fishing baits.

Answer:
Here are just a couple corrections which I think make it sound a little better.

Tony and James are saying, “Our entire family enjoys outdoor activities, for example, in addition to ice fishing, we enjoy hunting, fishing, canoeing trips, etc. ” Tony adds, “We have a cabin in northern Minnesota where our family usually spends a lot of time during the summer.” Tony kindly shows us the ropes and some of his family secrets on ice fishing baits.

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